lost and found

A strand of hair trying to find their place,

an eyelash trying not to fall out of the eye,

movie trying not to fall off the shelf,

a bug in the middle of a hurricane trying not to fall off a leaf,

a person trying to fit in to the crowd not stand out,

all i am saying is every one is lost and confused every once in a while so try to help them don't sit there your not helpless you know.

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

This is an Awesome expressive piece. Nice write

[CrystalClear2010]

Cute
eye lash falling out of eyelid
a movie that shouldnt be on the shelf needs to be given a dust
bugs being washed away by rain fall
feels like a hurrican to a bug hanging on a leaf

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Some fine wisdom, so deep for an 8 year old to write such a poem, way beyond that age...marvellous and WOW!!!!

[BellaLuv]

Yes, yes and oh yes. I can't stand a pity party. You have shown in your words that there is always a way no matter how difficult the task! :D

[Voice11]

Good visuals of what Lost really looks like, and good moral at the end.