Happy Halloween

happy halloween!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3!<3!<3 (@ @) . <--------- MUNSTER AHHHHH!!!!!!!! _____ VVVVV

Happy Halloween to all these witches and ghosts I call my friends,

Happy Halloween to all the princesses and cartton characters,

Happy Halloween to all the hearts that still has to mends,

Happy Halloween to all the Vampires theres more than enough blood that taste like necter.

 

Ghosts,

Ghouls,

Vampires,

Witches.

 

13 Or not dress up it's all you got,

There is only one reason I LOVE Halloween,

I Finally get to be some one else for a day WITHOUT threatened to get shot,

Happy Halloween to all my friends and my family.

 

Ghosts,

Ghouls,

Vampires,

Witches.

 

Happy Halloween to all these witches and ghosts I call my friends,

Happy Halloween to all the princesses and cartton characters,

Happy Halloween to all the hearts that still has to mends,

Happy Halloween to all the Vampires theres more than enough blood that taste like necter.

Reviews

[Voice11]

This seems like a very fun poem. But there is a few errors. in one of the lines, you misspell "cartoon". also the tense for "mends" is not right, I believe it should be "mend". One more thing,there should be some kind of conjunction between "without" and "threatened". should you mean "without being threatened" ? Other than those simple mistakes its is a very fun poem. I love Halloween myself. It has always been my favorite holiday. =)