Thinking(issues)

Thinking 

He thinks,
Somethings wrong with him,
She knows there's nothing,
Because love is running through her every limb.

She knows things,
Are messed up with herself,
She hopes he can see past it,
Be content with her love and health.

He thinks,
Somethings wrong with him,
She knows there's nothing,
Because love is running through her every limb.

In reality neither has flaws,
That someone can't look pass,
Because love slows time,
So that I can make you and your unnoticeable flaws mine.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was great! I loved this piece. I think telling someone you care about something like this would boost their spirits. I agree that love slows time. I could relate to this piece. I loved the emotion in this as well. Thanks for sharing. :)

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This is wonderfully Created and it expresses the conflict of emotion of young lovers starting out Wonderful write