She dances with the moonlight

 

She dances with the moonlight

Though she cannot see me

My eyes are fixed

On her flowing, swaying body

Like the ocean

Only silent

Like sand that fall from the dunes

And flies with wind

I am a star

Gazing at her

As she dances with the moonlight

Reviews

[Seriana]

How pretty! Soft and flowing and moonlight. It was an enchanting read. :)

[~crazy Beautiful~]

am i your muse
lol
i love this one
inspiring piece
beautiful

[she makes me weird]

I love this piece.
"my eyes are fixed" - I can picture someone lost in the moment despite everything that may go on around them. This piece is simple and beautiful.

[Rain]

Love this. Also, am and have always been fascinated by how connected our emotions are connected to the sea. Rain..

[Damien Dsoul]

Ohhh... sumptous and delicate is you in this poem. The poem has got grace, elevated in sensous tone and language. The imagery is very colourful indeed, watching the lady dance by the moonlight. What else can a man ask for?

[EvesDaughter]

The most romantic poetry is the poetry
written simply and from the heart. This
filled me up with visions and left me with
warmth.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A succinct and beautiful write. Sounds mesmorizing. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha