Serenity

senryu #1

Serenity loves

Those who hold peace in their minds

And peace in their world

 

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OMwe7WJK17M

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Isn't that the truth? That's probably why so many people are depressed... I think somehow religion is involved. >:(

lol Anyways, neat piece. It's flowy, easy to understand, and has a good vibe to it. ^^

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Anna]

wonderful!

[TamiViolet]

Not the easiest in the World to write, Jason... Peace... Isn't that what we all want...?
Nice...

[Wildfleour]

Indeed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Constance]

This is a pretty little Senryu. Nice thoughts. It reads like a bumper sticker or a slogan. Quite catchy.

[Melissa]

Hi Jason, this is a wonderful write with so few words. This is more of a Senryu than Haiku though. A Haiku mostly deals with nature or nature related things. Whatever though, I loved the thoughts contained within this write.

Missy

[Jessica L Auster]

It makes me feel good =]

[Seriana]

Oh yay!! Short and sweet. Love the message. :)