The inspired heart

Kara is that inspiration...

 

Thoughts

Flutter free

Like autumn leaves spiraling

Toward orange covered

Dirt roads lined with oak trees

Leading to endless plantations

Of our passion, (mere destinations)

Of traveled and worn hearts

               

                We see their…

Hands held with hope

Of a love finally found

As the ‘daffodil streams’

Find our dreams

And never more

Shall we wonder

-And never more

Would we wonder…

                What a kiss was

                What a scent was

                What a touch was

When our eyes meet

 

The sounds of sparkling streams

                As I hold my blonde-haired dream

Breathing in brisk mountain air

                And the scent of a flower in her hair

 

 

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

well MY GOODNESS. totally just stumbled onto this piece. I was like oh Jason wrote a new poem, and then I saw my name in the tagline.... oh Jason Jason Jason.

This is gorgeous.

"Toward orange covered
Dirt roads lined with oak trees"

love that so much.

"As the 'daffodil streams'
Find our dreams"

daffodil streams :) :) :)

"And never more
Shall we wonder
-And never more
Would we wonder�
What a kiss was
What a scent was
What a touch was
When our eyes meet"

that is set up so well. and flows beautifully.

"Breathing in brisk mountain air
And the scent of a flower in her hair"

jeeze. this is my favorite of yours, and not just because it's connected to me and my daffodil streams. i just think you took it to a whole new wonderful level. and then that last line just hits on so many levels, especially come from how special 'daffodil streams' was to me.

awwwwwwwwww!

wish i could give you the longest hug

[Tara Jean Olson]

Jason, you know, my name is Tara, so 'T' vs. 'K' is close enough:) (nah, i am kidding) this poem is just gorgeous!

[Jeanmarie Flaherty]

What can I say...the girl is magnetic, magical...something more :)


I adore this piece, I myself at am a loss for words, the flow here was amazing, the imagery, delicious, I love every line, every word...

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

love.jmm.

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wonderful imagery. Thank you for sharing.