Passion

Passion

A Poem by James Paulin

Intense views

Consuming purpose

Born and fed with fire

Unconditionally ablaze

 

Iron will, bone and blood

Heart, mind and soul

Pouring all into a cup

Swallowed in sacrificial deeds

 

Distinctive screams

Violently defined cries

Clamoring for attention

Equal measures of defiance and desire

 

Hammer home a message

Repeating it until heard

So loud the deaf take notice

Persistence rattles even closed minds

 

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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"Born and fed with fire"

"Equal measures of defiance and desire"

my favorite lines...well expressed!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a well written piece. Well done

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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WoW! I rarely say this, but WoW!
An Absolutely consuming write, deep and truly passionate, symbolicly vivid.
Thank you very much for sharing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 29, 2009

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..