e-ddiction

computer poem

 

Computer just died

Fan inside fried

Boards don’t like heat

Bodes silicone defeat

Laid mouse aside

 

So off it must go

How long, don’t know

e-tasks must wait         

down time I hate

pen and pad too slow

 

feeling forlorn

idea is born

what can I do

time to own two

solution well worn 

Reviews

[Wicahpi]

Yikes, that would suck!
I was lost without my computer
(twice) but now I have two!
Fun write :) Good luck in the contest.

[deeps]

This is too funny I like this. Makes me think of my last computer.
It's in computer heaven now or could be computer hell who really knows.

[Rowanna]

Thank you for entering my competition James. Once I have read all the entries, I will inform you of whether you got through or not. Also, I apologise for not reading the entries earlier, there have been other things on my mind.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem. Well Done!

[Kerry]

ROTFL! I own two laptops and two desktops for this reason. The rhyme is excellent! Well done!