Respite

Respite

A Poem by James Paulin
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Cameo

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Cat nap

Indian summer

Carefree days of innocent youth

Coffee breaks

January mid-winter thaw

Summertime vacation rest

Sweet dreams

© 2009 James Paulin


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If only one could catnap through the winter into blissful spring and summer. I would even tolerate early fall. The coffee breaks and thoughts of youth running and jumping into the piles of leafs, building forts out of them. Yep you guessed it I could be a tomboy at times. The scent of the leafs burning. Great memories. But find winter just to darn cold! You did a great job with this writing. Causes one to stop and think about the changing seasons and how we relate to them.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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If only one could catnap through the winter into blissful spring and summer. I would even tolerate early fall. The coffee breaks and thoughts of youth running and jumping into the piles of leafs, building forts out of them. Yep you guessed it I could be a tomboy at times. The scent of the leafs burning. Great memories. But find winter just to darn cold! You did a great job with this writing. Causes one to stop and think about the changing seasons and how we relate to them.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short, to the point, no wasted words. A nice respite from some of the tedious poetry that seems to believe all things must be said, that the reader has no imagination. :-)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..