Shine

Transfusions of love

Sunlight to heartache repair

Hope flows to and fro

Reviews

[MoonlitAngel]

Beautiful hiaku :) Very short, very sweet, and to the point. Great way to express yourself. I'm not too good at haiku's myself lol. I always mess up.

--Blood

[cartera]

Well done. The joining of two different concepts to a third seemingly unrelated one. What do they call that again?
ATB
Alex.

[Lizanne]

A beautiful writing in such short form. May the sun bring the warm healing rays to the heartache.

[deeps]

Wondrful!! write and amazing!

[cest la vie]

Blissfully beautiful!!
Outstanding, I am hoping you win. good Luck!!
Lynne