Eventide

Eventide

A Poem by James Paulin
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haiku

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vermillion orb rests

 

upon pastel horizon

 

twilight spectacle  

© 2009 James Paulin


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Very beautiful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh that's quite beautiful. The last line, just so nicely sums it up. What I love though is that it does make sense and not just some random lines put together to make a haiku. Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Absolutely beautiful. It's so vivid and colorful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Visually beautiful...
Well done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 16, 2009

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..