Sub-Zero

Monosyllabic poetry craft

Frost bite freeze,

blown cold fare,

each breath smokes

rime.

Sharp chill cuts

bone down deep,

an ice edge

shiv.

 

Reviews

[Eternally Elemental]

If there was a description for eating dry ice it would be this.
Very chilling, with the structure and in the descriptions.

"Sharp chill cuts
bone down deep,
an ice shiv."
Loving that. I have never heard of 'monosyllabic' poetry before, but I don't know a lot to start with hahaha. Oooh, got the munches!

*nom nom dry ice nom*

[angelina neves]

wonderful!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Now we are good!

[Salvatore Buttaci]

an icy edge: you have one syllable too many, four instead of three. If you could fix it, you have a great chance because this is a very good poem.

[Phibby Venable]

this is wonderful , the bite, the smoke..condensed excellence!