Dawn
A Poem by James Paulin
 AmeriKu 
begin fresh
as night fades away
morning blest
sunrise, give praise
© 2010 James Paulin
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Magnificent!
Posted 13 Years Ago
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Very nice, it has a fresh and joyous feel to it.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Nice. It reads like a devotional. I love it.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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amen...
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Nicely done! I like the little prayer part at the end.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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short and very sweet.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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simple,sweet and flowy;;;;;;
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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a nice thought and great idea to make us aware.
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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A great poem!
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on January 19, 2010
Last Updated on January 19, 2010
Author
James PaulinMI
About
After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..
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