Sampler

Chocolate poem (double etheree acrostic)

Choice

Has made

One of these

Compulsory.

Oral Nirvana,

Luxurious,

Another.

Tempting. 

Ease!

Reviews

[a]

paints a smile on my lips. a light, delightful write. altough i am not into short, minimalistic poetry, i enjoyed this one.

personally, i prefer less vague approach, but this poem allows to read widely between the lines, beyond the written, in search fro what's not said.

since i cannot be completely saticfied with such writings. i won't rate it writerscafewise.

but -
5 stars ;)

[Subjective Sanity]

Mmmm....chocolate!

[_thesovo]

*clap clap clap* i liked it! Thank you for submitting this in my contest.

[miSS LEaf]

Oral nirvana, wow how did you come up with that? :D
a delightful read, enjoyed~ :)

[kewlbluetiger]

And another, and another, and another... Why is it so easy?! Oral nirvana, great word choice. Couldn't have described it better!!!

[Ellen Hammond]

An interesting combination of forms which I would find hard to restrict myself to but you have accomplished the fete like a master. You have also got me craving chocolates. LOL Very well done.

[Ferg]

i love the minimalist style as well as the acrostic form of poetry. Very clever and I suddenly want one of those chocolate covered cherries beckoning me from the kitchen cupboard!

[Ed Hart]

I've met a few ladies like that...