Early

haiku

 

Morning blushes light

Puffs like heaven float above

Newborn coos awake

Reviews

[Quickbeam]

Short , but very sweet, the description of a good morning.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

Breathtakingly beautiful, one of the best mornings ever.

[Kristin Brecoe]

=] how pretty.

look up haiku society of america. submit to a contest. =]

[Sara]

haha, great, i've always had a thing for haikus -- they always come across sounding so serene (this one doubly so with its subject matter) :) i especially like that first line, 'morning blushes light', lovely personification there, and so appropriate for this beautiful sunday morning.

[Gandré]

this is making my day and I want to feed them. haiku is emptiness in words and bursting imagination in head of readers. you did it well..

[miSS LEaf]

perfect for my sunday morning :)

[_thesovo]

great!

[Ferg]

Nice! :)