orange

orange

A Poem by James Paulin
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TETRACTYS POEM

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Flash

goldfish

Buddhist sash

tiger stripe swish

clementine, tangerine, poppies unfold

Jack-o-lantern, creamsicles, marigold

barrels to slow

sunset wash

cheeto

squash

© 2010 James Paulin


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made me smile :)
nice poem

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mmm... creamsicles.... Great work, as always.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats for winning the Tetractys #3 Contest. Great Work!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mmmm Cheetos! lol This is delightful.
Thank you for a fun Tetracty poem in Orange.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love cheetos, love this poem. :)


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Knock, knock
Who's there?
Orange
Orange who?
Orange you glad I didn't pick this color to write about too?? :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Truth: I am sitting here eating an orange creamcicle..

this is dielightful..

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We call cheetos wotsits over here :) But I really, really want to know what a creamsicle is. It sounds calorific. Yum.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love it! I wonder if Ed's laughing prohibits him from writing anything of CONSEQUENCE either?? :)

My fingers are turning the keyboard orange cuz I just ate some Cheetos.........



Posted 15 Years Ago


I'm too busy laughing to write anything of inconsequence...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..