Red

TETRACTYS POEM

 

 

bright

stop light

dynamite

furious sight

tomato, strawberry, radish and beet

Rudolphs’ nose, Santa clothes from cap to feet

dangerous part

cherry tart

sub-start

heart

 

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Great use of the Tetracty form. Congrats to you!

[Wicahpi]

Woo Hoo RED! lol
mmmm a cherry tart!
red beet eggs and strawberry shortcake.
You get my stomach rumblin! hahaha

Delightful in Color!
Thank you for entering this into my Tetracty #4 contest!
Good Luck :)

[Narnie]

I was going to say tulips but I see you have covered that in the next poem. Red tulips - a whole field of them... there really is no better sight. Dangerous part, yep.

[Ferg]

Your poetry is also well "red"! Between the two of us, we've covered red, orange, yellow, green, blue, purple, and white! A rainbow of tetractys poems! I'd tackle black, but that would be depressing on such a beautiful day! This is my favorite "color" in your series :)

[Gandré]

this was sweet and creative.

[miSS LEaf]

excellent, :) ~L

[harman kour]

nice write!:) red is an amazing color... not only from the things we observe but even from scientific point of view...!!!