yellow

A Poem by James Paulin

TETRACTYS POEM

sun

lemon

gold saffron

to Oz upon

banana, forsythia, hyena

caution sign, dandelion, center road line

bumble bee

canary,

buttered

corn

© 2010 James Paulin

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Nancy Lee Shrader

Great use of the Tetracty form. Congrats to you!

Posted 15 Years Ago

A.Lee

Oh, I like this one! Yellow is probably my favorite color and I love the things you chose to describe it with and the structure of the poem. Great job. I find that simple poems like this are often hard for people to write. You did great with it.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ferg	Hyenas are yellow?? Nice one..........I'll have to come up with another color now!! Posted 15 Years Ago Hyenas are yellow?? Nice one..........I'll have to come up with another color now!! Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wicahpi

"To Oz upon" i like that!
Canary yellow is so pretty, too.
Wonderful, as always!!

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 3, 2010
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James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..