Awesome

Awesome

A Poem by James Paulin
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Haiku

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the whole universe,

forces, matter and spirit,

exists to serve Love

© 2010 James Paulin


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Congrats on this great winning poem. Well Done!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting, very cute and purposeful. Nice statement.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You packed a lot of power into a tiny haiku. Interesting how something so small can explain the purpose of something so vast. Of everything, even. Well done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, simple and profound... love how you capitalized 'Love', perfect touch.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome threesome...I think, you couldn't say this if you didn't know this...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Perty good.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'll 2nd that!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

by Love do you mean God? Anyways good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on April 26, 2010
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..