Mask

Rhymeo

 

 

 

Pretend,

conceal or reveal

to achieve or somewhat deceive,

to what end?

With style it only lasts awhile.

If self is not sufficient,

amend.

 

 

Reviews

[alesuriko]

I really liked the power in the last line. The flow/rhythm felt a little weak in "to achieve or somewhat deceive, / to what end?" But overall, good poem. Nice statement.

[Carlton Lloyd Smith]

Powerful last line. I love the rhythm and the inner rhyme in the fifth line. I'm also impressed by how much it says in so few words. That takes talent.

[Ferg]

nice one jp!

[Phibby Venable]

perfect package here, James!

[Narnie]

Perfect.

[Ed Hart]

amen

[Wicahpi]

Good One! I like this style, too.