gilded moon

haiku

 

 

wisp veiled orb aglow

seductive in summer damp

nocturnal amuse

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Oh this is so good. Congrats on this great haiku.

[Samuel Dickens]

This one awakens old feelings I had as a teenager, arm around my girl and watching the moon rise through my '54 Ford's windshield.

[miSS LEaf]

mmm delicious................ hope you don't mind me using that adjective~

[indu]

love it! u must be the Lord of words :)

[floarealbastra10]

beautifully done

[James Paulin]

Simple syllable selection stands corrected. Thank you Fran and Wicahapi.

[Wicahpi]

Perfect :)

[Fran Marie]

Beautiful Haiku, James, but you need to add 1 syllable
in the first line please~ even though there are 5 vowels
which usually will give you the correct count the second e in "Veiled" is silent

Great Pen and I really liked this!