Simmer down

Haiku

green drabs to tan tint

long sun stunts by and goodbye

heat lingers lazy

Reviews

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

elemental swirls drape their tactile movements across the metaphorical shoulders of the audience~ sensate as sensate can be~ lustrous lovely composition~

[Wondering Mind]

Very creative Haiku on Autumn, capturing the colour, temprature, and light. Nice!!

[Dinesh Sairam]

A nice haiku. Twitches those lazy nerves.

[Abigail T]

That first line is beautiful! And it leads nicely into the rest of the poem. Sweet and lovely.

[Wicahpi]

an interesting view of Autumn :)

[alesuriko]

Beautiful atmosphere in this haiku. I love that the heat pours out of this and the imagery feels so warm. Well done!

[TAO]

Like Eden to dust... Very nice. I can definitely feel the heat in this one.

[Desert Dreamer]

The long hot days of a lazy August Summer. Great image in this haiku.

[Ed Hart]

oh, and the hand of a friend