cat clash
A Poem by
James Paulin
micro-fun
stare
prepare
screech
claws reach
slash
fast thrash
heat
retreat
strut
tail jut
© 2010 James Paulin
Reviews
lol this was cool and funny...I could see it all :o)
Posted 15 Years Ago
this is perfect...each word exact & bringing more impact
to the next one.
Posted 15 Years Ago
this is perfect...each word exact & bringing more impact
to the next one.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like this I found it cute and creative.
Posted 15 Years Ago
I like this I found it cute and creative.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Macro-write..Perfect in it's capture of the spar
Posted 15 Years Ago
Macro-write..Perfect in it's capture of the spar
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
interesting omg! I have a boy cat poor thing can't fight! I told my dad I don't want him outside now he's limping and I'm going to have a few words with the cat that beat him up! NO ONE HURT MY KITTY! lol I like this though it's expressions give a strong sense of what your talking about. Nice job!
Posted 15 Years Ago
interesting omg! I have a boy cat poor thing can't fight! I told my dad I don't want him outside now he's limping and I'm going to have a few words with the cat that beat him up! NO ONE HURT MY KITTY! lol I like this though it's expressions give a strong sense of what your talking about. Nice job!
Yes! Reminds me of yesterday morning outside in my garden. Beautifully simple yet perfectly fitting piece!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Yes! Reminds me of yesterday morning outside in my garden. Beautifully simple yet perfectly fitting piece!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
ser-she la cat-she
Posted 15 Years Ago
ser-she la cat-she
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 17, 2010
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Author
James Paulin MI
About
After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are ..
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