purpose
A Poem by James Paulin
 Tanka 
love is sufficient
sensible explanation
gift of
creation
wonderful reason
of God
we have
breath of life
© 2010 James Paulin
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Good!
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Beautifully descriptive, creative and a wonderful submission to Sal's Tanka contest.
Posted 15 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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amen..breath of fresh air
Posted 15 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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alpha and omega
Posted 15 Years Ago
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A great Tanka, my friend. Opening and ending are stories in their own right
Posted 15 Years Ago
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. wow!!! ... the line "we have breath of life" is particularly amazing ...
Posted 15 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 2, 2010
Last Updated on November 2, 2010
Author
James PaulinMI
About
After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..
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