November

A Poem by James Paulin

Opalescent grays

Winced squints kowtow speckled spray

Damp chill permeates

© 2010 James Paulin

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Nimbus Thread

How the chill seeps through the moment. Wonderful.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_kate

So true. Great wording. I'm going to turn up my heater now.

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie Harrison

Oh, I need a blanket after reading this. Thanks.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Wondering Mind

oh yes, we're there alright.

Posted 15 Years Ago

Unfortunately it does sound like November.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on November 4, 2010
Last Updated on November 4, 2010

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James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..