Freudian flip

Senrhyme string

Id

 

primal influence

 species instinctive essence

  human perseverance

 

                  Ego 

                      

                      conscious awareness

                        schemes gleaned from finesse and stress

                         be preparedness

 

          Superego

                                                  

            an introspective

              spiritual perspective

               divine objective

Reviews

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

I like how the rhyme scheme evolves from tight to loose
I'd also like to see a Jung-ian spin/sequel
love how the flow WITHIN the phrasing
connects it all together
nicely done

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

When you range into metaphysical and psychological realms, I am VERY pleased.

[Narnie]

A pinch of all three may spice up a soup? 'Preparedness'... I really like that word. :)

[Nimbus Thread]

The essential trio. Loose one and we turn to Jello. Enjoyed the form too.

[Mason]

Shelved!

[Inkcognito]

A clever dissection of the characteristics of ego - creatively compiled trio, pretty awesome, Jim!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Ah...Very good, very good! Great triplet senryu...analytical psychology to boot.