Pop It

Pop It

A Poem by James Paulin



white

yellow

caramel

buttered with salt

Cracker Jacks with prize

microwave bags rise

hot air popper

stove top pan

kernels

ouch

© 2010 James Paulin


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The use of the three colours at the beginning "white, yellow, caramel' allows the rest of the poem to concentrate on sound, what a masterful idea, I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very tastey poem you have here! The imagery was great!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can easily smell this hear this...love popcorn and all its fixing's especially this time of the year!


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We don't have the hot caramel popcorn over here. It has been a source of resentment with me for some time :) Lovely sounds, James.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could realy pictutre this as I was reading I love popcprn hehe
great write.


Posted 15 Years Ago


:-)...the popper the better with butter!
Nothing compliments a movie better than a bowl of freshly popped buttery popcorn!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 18, 2010
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..