"Ode to cliche"

" Ode to cliché"

Cliché the world will always be
Like a detective with a hot blondes mystery

Cliché!cliché!yes it is so
Like a hipster poets with cigarette,shades,and bongo

Cliché isn't all that bad you see
Love story's have break ups but they end up happily

Cliché why must I run from you
It's like magician making you pick a card letting lose a dove or two

Cliche I Guess i must accept
Writing it's cliché but it's all I get

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

A great ode to cliches! The thing is they are so true. Me thinks if they were wine they would be highly valued! Maybe it's just me, but I had trouble with the fourth stanza, the second line feeling a bit awkward to read. I don't know if its because its longer than all other lines or its due to word choices or more syllables. The rhymes are good, though!

[fitz Roberts]

No your tight I've sat here and looked at over and over again and thought the same thing thank you for the read this poem unlike all my other ones I actually had to put thought into lmao the other ones just come to me that's probally part of this one's akwardness

[Barbara Walker]

I know what you mean! The ones that just come to you are a great big gift from the universe!