Judgment

Can you analyze me objectively,

Or are you stuck within your subjectivity?

You all criticize me collectively

But does it give you the desired effect in me?

Am I looking for vindication?

Subconscious sins needing salvation?

Is there something hidden in my hesitation?

Are there reasons for things I do not mention?

Has the past made my fate predestined?

Or do I have the right to have it questioned?

Reviews

[pinpen]

i agree intense, but well written.

[just is]

Wow this is really intense, I liked this alot!

[AgMoore]

intense and moody, I like it your fate is up to you = )

[Distant horizons]

You always have that right. Great write, solidly written.