FORGOTTEN

It's late again and I can't sleep
Keep thinking about his sweet lips..
Passionate kisses like never before
Awakened me to the core of my soul
                        but he don't hear me anymore
                        he's forgotten the love.

Reviews

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"Passionate kisses like never before
Awakened me to the core of my soul'

very affecting. a lucid dream of "Forgotten"
~great expressionism!

[Dani]

My only suggestion is that you change "don't" to "doesn't." Other than that, great write.

[Geralyn Miller]

What a foolish boy, love should always be cherished and remembered. Even if the love has ended, the memory of it enriches us.. Nice piece, but I don't like the picture. There is no man worth dying for.