I pass love

I pass love

A Poem by Writeforlovely

I pass love like it's gold and

 then am left with rags.

love is a treasure

and it is always hidden

so when I find it I get excited

and pass it away so fast I just want to share it all

and now I am hurting because I feel so poor

I pass love like it's a Christmas present

disappointment happens in a blink of an eye

It's easily spotted with a fake smile 

my love once again a gift not wanted

but I'll pass love unconditionally

ill deal with disappointment and poverty

before I rot with all my possessions 

with no one to pass them too

I'll pass love until love comes back to me.

© 2015 Writeforlovely


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i like this! There is an innocence but not, a willingness but a dissappointment as well.. an eagerness but more than a trace of realism,, well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow, deep words, really beautiful. A lot of people find the hurt too much, and they stop looking for it. But this is such a healthy and happy attitude to have; to feel the hurt but still allow yourself to look for it and embrace it because it's worth it in the end. I really enjoyed reading this one :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ill pass love until it comes back to me, what a wonderful way to be. Knowing the kind and selfless person hurts, but cant and wont change for greed of keeping it to yourself. Inspiring.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on October 4, 2015
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