Candy

This sweet candy cane is melting and your right beside me. You melt all sorts of sweetness on a cold winter day. I name you Dulce, my love.

This sweet candy cane is melting and you're right beside me.

You melt all sorts of sweetness on a cold winter day. I name you Dulce, my love.

Sun kissed cheeks and amber eyes. Peppermint breath smells so good.

You are better than a sweet tooth because you bring no decay.

Candy candy candy is your middle name.

Flavors swirl for you and me like red and brown leaves fall effortlessly.
 

Reviews

[T0TS]

A very sweet write...nicely done. :)

[Courtney M Watson]

This is lovely.
"You melt all sorts of sweetness on a cold winter day. I name you Dulce, my love." - my favorite line.

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Dulce, so sweet. I enjoy this lollipop adventure! Candy Land is where you reside. No sweet desires to hide.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a lovely romantic write. I could almost taste the peppermint. Just one small edit for you....in the first line, "your" should be "you're". Lydi**