Thoughts During Sex

Self-descriptive

Unfold the petal-skin like a

present wrapped in tissue paper

take special care not to force or rip

because you need to use the

stuff later.

 

I am round and you are hard.

sold muscles moving under

that yellow skin you have

reminds me of something reborn from the dead

like an agile and sexual version of

Frankenstein's monster.

Reviews

[Mysteral - Night Prowle..]

I saw the magic word in the title and thought I must read... Sadly I was disappointed, not with the poem, everything seems in its place, but that you seem so disillusioned by sex...[ponders for a while].... Anyway, it made me wonder if the author is male or female, and without looking at your profile I would have to say female.
Um well, back to the poem, my favourite line...
>>>reminds me of something reborn from the dead
Wonderful sentimentality. I like it.

[yinseriv]

HaHaHa. I bet he'll want to use it again later. Another good poem MARZ. I love the thought behind the frankenstein's monster. After all it doesn't come to life without the loving hands of a creator and a massive jolt. Hmmm.... Maybe this poem has more depth than I thought. But that is no surprise. All of your work has thought deeper than the crisp words you present.