Dragging it behind

It's just there

it just is

I want flow, flow, shooting flow

warmth mixed with games to see what would happen

a comfort of uneasiness

trying not to make a mess

continuously willing to confess

insecurities, issues, f**k ups

because they are there to find

 available if desired

and warranted if indulged - only to pacify

pacify  with falsity- pacify indulgently

the phrases and emotions made up of delicate force

existence withering away

melting in order to escape

crawling and dragging with sticky sludge trailing closely behind

Reviews

[Maskedthoughts]

This was very real! Great write!

[Saddam]

A beautiful work with play of words... I enjoyed it......

[Coyote Poetry]

"a comfort of uneasiness
trying not to make a mess
continuously willing to confess
insecurities, issues, f**k ups
because they are there to find
available if desired"
I like how you budget words. The statements above said a lot without expressing a thousand words. Easy to fall into reasons why we are disappointed. Hard to find places where we can see the light of hope. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[audrie]

Thank you for taking such care in reviewing this.