Cracked shell

The shell is solid 

keeping the s**t contained

The mind is aware of the circumstances

but feels powerless because it doesn't know how to turn the s**t into manure and plant the seeds of blissfulness
The soul is stuck and cannot make a decision because it is in a coma

the shell is becoming weak and beginning to crack and all of the s**t came spilling out

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Shells are often cracked to become something more. Some spring birds, others bring a life. Not saying a shell is a bad thing, but in this expression of work, it brings a light and life that most never see.


Brilliant

[audrie]

that's a beautiful way to interpret this poem. . . Made me certainly look at it differently - thanks for the review! . . . looking forward to reading your work

[audrie]

that's a beautiful way to interpret this poem. . . Made me certainly look at it differently - thanks for the review! . . . looking forward to reading your work

[Pól]

Weird & disgusting
I love it!

[audrie]

ha ha! yay! I'm glad you liked it!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

does someone have some toilet paper i could use?

i'd like to clean up and then plant some seeds....hoping to sprout new life into this stuck soul.

[audrie]

ha ha! I wish that I could view all of life's s****y experiences as manure to plant seeds of happiness

[A. Amos]

Simply splendid, enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing

[audrie]

thanks - I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review