Vibrations

I swallowed you

indulged in you

I was drugged in your presence

while you were lying on top of me

peacefully melting into me

I was confused by the vibrations of penetrating and paralyzing love

I'm in complete ecstasy 

nervous because you're next to me

the smoldering feelings of lust and desire

I cannot help it

I want to go higher

my heart is blinded by the caress of your hand

I'm not really sure if you would understand

my lust for you consumes me

If this is false love

it will significantly wound me

Reviews

[nseddy]

Wow So powerful!
Lust and ecstasy are indeed fantastic, blinding and confusing all at the same time. You describe that perfectly here. Thanks for sharing this!

[audrie]

you're welcome - I appreciate your review - thsy are always exciting to get and makes me feel like my writing is good - so thanks again

[Pax]

this felt like a continuation of your "absolutely nothing" on which both had intense longging and passion. very nice...

[audrie]

Yes, I tend to wright mostly about relationships because they often seem so confusing to me. My poetry is usually meant to be a welcoming to the relationship or a goodbye. thanks for the review

[Pax]

keep it up my friend...

[Avinash]

Intimacy and confusion .... primal feelings expressed in most poignant way.

[audrie]

Thanks Avinash. I really appreciate you taking the time to read this poem!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

OMG, loved this poem. Very creative and beautifully written. Nicely penned my friend.

Kaze~ :-)

[audrie]

Thanks Kaze - I also appreciate you taking the time to read this.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[BlueDreams]

Wow nice use of metaphor in each verse :) It was so enchanting poem about love, lust, and a doubt toward love :) I loved it..Great job friend.. :)

[audrie]

Thanks for the review. I always think that I would like to work on metaphors because they are soooo awesome. I appreciate that you liked them.

[Cory Barrett]

Lust addiction is a dangerous game, but so very exhilarating !

[audrie]

So very true - so very true

[Coyote Poetry]

Lust and love. A heartbeat apart.
"my lust for you consumes me
If this is false love"
Sometime we are led by the wrong things. Some peaks cannot be maintained. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[audrie]

That's great to hear - thanks for the review - it's reviews like this that make me want to continue writing

[Coyote Poetry]

Keep writing. You are amazing. Alive and strong thoughts.

[John Thomas]

I have felt these kinds of feelings, and you put it very well and passionately. I love your writing.

[audrie]

Thank you so much for the review - I'm really glad you liked it - feel free to send me rread requests any time!

[audrie]

I guess that there is always the chance of love being false - It takes courage to enter into relationships but I think that love is worth the chance - thanks for the review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i know i will be wounded, but i'll take it...your love is worth the bleeding.