Barking

Just a loser walking in your shadow
Will I be forever lost in this meadow?

It's fine to love in the dark
but when the lights are on, all I seem to do is bark

Telling you might be a mistake
but it's one I have to take
'cause after all, I can't keep up this fake

Reviews

[Mrs H]

Bark is a verb that cannot be taken seriously! Rhyme again is governing your diction choices.
Second last line - but it's a chance I have to take. You make mistakes, you take chances, therefore the suggestion of adding in the words 'a chance'.