You Said

you said you would never hurt me

but that's exactly what you did

you tore me wide open for the masses to discern

my thoughts and insensitivity's to be judged 

by those who would never understand like you once did

you said that you would love me forever

but that didn't exactly happen either

                        you told me your sins and i kept them safe inside of me              

and let them devour me whole

you bullied me into submission and made me your slave

i followed you on your way down to the habitation of fallen angels

on the road there i met some becoming people

they abet me for the way i was turning into you

you said that i was your other half

 and admitted that neither of us were whole

i was once your friend but that was soon over

you disheartened me and everything i stood for

my morals disappeared as fast as your cigarette

you said that you completed me

but all you did was decimate my soul

secret bullies i have to say are the lowest

its a vicious cycle with you loving them 

and 

they pretending to love you.

Reviews

[Neythan Cardoso]

I read this while i was in class and it felt like the whole entire world stopped while i read this..... This is some crazy stuff. Its the actual things that happen to us and things we feel deeply about that inspires us to write amazing things like this! Made my heart pump faster with this one!