Thee Accused

Poem

ALWAYS....

Never Rightly...

ALWAYS...

Every detail...

and Wronging me.

Is This Wrong as well to feel

this way or state it ?

I feel It's Not...

But, Who Am I ?

Oh Yes 

Thee Accused 

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

The formatting and style that you use in this piece causes it to jump off of the page and smack your readers right in the kisser! To me, it was fresh and inventive. Some people mean well and think that they have all of the mysteries of the Universe figured out. They are never wrong. Most times, they are rarely right!
Great emotional write...

[Owlgirl]

I love the formatting and the intensity of the poem, I can't wait to read more!

[Chris]

fingers have a way of pointing - before the whole story is spoken... and often its all made up to give another something to talk or just wonder about.

This is really interesting to read :) Nice work...
'thee accused' always faces those criticisms.. unjustly or not.
Thanks for sharing :)

[Brittany]

Oooh. Well done. Great phrasing and wording.

[Sarah W. French]

Very well done. I like the use of spacing the different lines. The feelings seemed to become more complicated over time, and i liked that. Can't wait to see/read more of your writing.

[*** Hey Jude***]

It is very sad that people feel the need to judge . Your words are heartfelt, and I am sure we all have felt like the accused.
"ALWAYS....
Never Rightly...
ALWAYS...
Every detail...
and Wronging me."
Yet the truth is we are exactly who we choose to be in a world that tells people what they must be. Time will show your truth to others, and in the mean time it truly does not matter what others think. What matters is what you think! ~ :-)

[Enchanted Spirit]

That it does, that it does

[Larry Dyson]

hmmm depends on who was questioning doesnt it?