pointless addiction

i have this aching feeling

that i'll spend a great portion of my adult life,

curled in an uncomfortable chair

in front of a computer screen

scrolling through page after pointless page

of meaningless information

and cliched pictures

searching for something that i've probably

accidentally scrolled past already.

Reviews

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. me too ...

[Rene Velez]

and I'll probably be sitting at a computer screen at the opposite end looking at that something you passed by, LOL, good stuff

[Tim Lion]

:)
I have that feeling everyday. I'm so busy looking, that I miss the overall view.
Forest for the trees stuff.

And, I have the feeling that your adult life will be a beautiful thing, filled with brilliant literature and laughter and, who knows, perhaps even dancing. ;)

Love the piece.
But, remember the wisdom given by old guys like me,
NEVER kill the party before you get there.

t

[Mockingbird]

love the irony in this poem. succinct narrative. great piece.

[Kara]

I love this. I feel your pain. I love how this is a light subject made deep. Don't change a thing; nothing is missing.

[Kenneth The Poet]

I got the message, don't change it.

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

I don't know, it seems like something is missing from it.

Matthew Hardy

[roarke]

have you heard of Mahjong?