Forever already

When I saw you I knew

No sounds could be heard

Blissful silence

Drenched every word

Something connected 

Do you still need more

Dont question my love 

As many times before

I love you forever already

And more.

 

 

Reviews

[nothing]

I love the depth and emotion you do put into it. It makes me wonder who you could possibly be talking about.

[trapperhoney]

lovely, deep and strong.

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

I like the silence. I get annoyed with, "Do you still need more." Don'ts kills it for me. forever/already becomes passive aggressive. I'm happy you're a Freeman.

[penchantpoet]

Hi Freeman!
Nice descriptive write! Loved the title... just wondering if a little punctuation would accentuate certain parts. What do you think?
Well done
PP

[Crinkle°]

absolutely beautiful! and moving! I love!