Closing doors

Living and dying 

are equally hard

Always- just trying

to deal with the card.

 

Bad, good 

Real,love

time oh time 

never enough.

When does it end

the struggle of life

Is there ever a time

will I feel "This is right"

For now carry on

as  we before

try to keep open 

the ever closing door

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Peace and calm come often in our life. We just wish to make them last longer. In my life I found many places where I found friendship and peace. But we must work, make money and fall into wrong places to know what we need and want. If we look at our life. There is a lot of good also. Life is a struggle. Everyone need a day to do what they desire. A long walk. A long talk with a friend. Or just watching the sun rise and fall into the sea. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[PadfootBlack]

Clever and lovely. A 'make-you-think' poem. 100/100

Right now in my life this poem could be my personalanthem. Nicely written my friend

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your work this early morn..Thanks for choosing me as a friend..Sunflower

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

The last four lines in particular..loved them..

[An owl on the moon]

This is such a profound write.. you made me examine my own life just a bit more.. what is important.. and why.. For me the second passage struck me: "Time oh time .. never enough." It's so true..

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. very perceptive ... and in the end ... very receptive too ...