Almost

Your words ring true

throughout my soul,

Clumsy , foolish

when left alone.

Hearts to nourish

care to feed,

neglected of passion

will start to bleed.

Stem the flow 

Compress with love.

Almost perfect

too perfect 

to touch.

Reviews

[jinjahman]

Great

[Cynthia]

Wow...
Great Write!
I love the story you are talking about, and I love this!

[.]

This is so well delieverd, Thoughts from the heart flow so well. Wonderful write.

[Kerry O'Connor]

I like the structure of this poem, the repetition and the lines dwindling at the end.

[Wolf]

nice

[An owl on the moon]

There are such richly painted thoughts flowing here, as you confess a loving dependence on another.. one who speaks deeply to your heart. And your last line is a brilliant expression of that overwhelming sense of being.