There Once Was A Little Girl

"There once was a little girl who never knew love until a boy broke her heart." This is a poem written by Megan Fox which is tattooed one her left rib cage. It's empowering; simple yet deep. I liked it so much that I've written a poem centered around it.

There once was a little girl,
Who never knew love until a boy broke her heart,
It all started with a few love letters,
But what it blossomed into was extraordinary; much, much better.

There once was a little girl,
Who never knew love until a boy broke her heart,
He was perfect, breath as fresh as mint,
Oh, she was in love, with the boy named Clint.

There once was a little girl,
Who never knew love until a boy broke her heart,
Everything was wonderful, or so was her perception,
But he was a coward, nothing but a deception.

There once was a little girl,
Who never knew love until a boy broke her heart,
The girl who was left so abruptly in the dark,
The boy, now just a crossed out mark.

There once was a little girl,
Who never knew love until a boy broke her heart,
Love was unpredictable, but in time she would learn,
That there was no point dwelling, on something gone and forgotten.

There once was a little girl,
Who never knew love until a boy broke her heart,
And that little girl, was me.

 

Reviews

[Abhigyan]

End of the poem is just toooooo good.

[Breanna Wilson]

This is awesome and so sweet.

[Sundownsam]

I really enjoyed it with a smile. So that little girl was you? That boy needs a spank.

[Camille K.]

very nice! good job.

[Wicahpi]

in your Author Notes you should include Megan Fox's Poem. I'd like to read it.
Thank you for sharing your version.

[Jacky Bones]

the repetition gives a wonderful flow

[Theresa]

I loved the ending how it turned from just a little girl to something more personal. I also liked the lines:
"Everything was wonderful, or so was her perception,
But he was a coward, nothing but a deception."
Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

[Skelasoldier]

Very nice poem, a simple start that leads to a climatic resolution, keep up the good work :D