World of Forever

I'm not sure why I wrote this... it just came to me.

I am lost in this world of forever

The universe, four walls

closing in on me

Still trying to be my own guide

through life

Every day another leap

Every other day a fall

Three steps forward

Two steps back

I am lost in this world of forever

But do I want to be found?

 

Author's Note

Ignore the lack of punctuation, please

Reviews

[Rainbow Rider]

"It just came to me." That line itself is what poetry is. A feeling that just comes to you and you put it to words. And you did it beautifully. Look forward to reading more of your writings, and welcome to the Cafe.

[nadya]

i like this, esp the last line