Musically Metaphorical

A piece I wrote a few months ago

that obscure chord
it sounds so distant
so chaotic
so dissonance

 those string of notes
that never really seems to work
they sound odd
out of place, thats me

i am like that sharp note
that you weren't suppose to play
in the scale of life

you once asked me
if i was a song
what song would i be?
just give me a descending minor scale

that minor note, striking it down
the downward notion
give or take a metaphor

you said "you are a guitar"
think of how far you can go
or how fast i can break
pluck the strings enough and i will snap

when the bridge snaps, the tension releases
occasionally striking the player, a deep cut,
a scar, even the occasional fractured wrist
depending on the tension i was wound at

so restring me up
play a sad songs on me
my specialties
deep hollowed wood frame

that warmed tone
perfect when feeling alone
you know my depths
as i take my slow breaths
 

Author's Note

Any criticism is always nice, as well as any comments or anything really

Reviews

[Kairi_Lynn]

Really good imagry, a few grammer errors like captiolization and spelling, yet Over all it was a great read, I look fword to reading more of your poetry, it is also clear that you love for music flows through your writing. You convayed good emotion.