Is There a Right Song?

Is There a Right Song?

A Poem by Frostveil

For moments at a time i wonder
what song might've won her
in the distant past
one that she didn't last
now i look at my guitar
is the magic key in a jar
or is there a tune to your heart
a melodic dark
or a harmonic light
that has scales of great height
but now the time has come
for me to come and hum
a song i tried so hard
something i would want to guard
a simple melody
a complex harmony
an unfamiliar tune
all to win your heart,
please don't tell me
i tried to hard to please,
please just say to me,
that i may take your hand now
please love me,
leave him in the dark behind you
please just tell me
I'm the only one thats right
all because
a simple melody
a complex harmony
an unfamiliar tune
all to win your heart

© 2009 Frostveil


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Frostveil
Frostveil

Fresno, CA



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I write poetry, short stories, and songs/music. I enjoy the good read I do give criticism if asked for I always welcome criticism :D more..