beauty is not a question

souls has its request though

It’s not the beauty that you have

It’s where my soul relaxes.

Do you know secrets about souls?

If not

 Leave me with my choice

Author's Note

bear me again

Reviews

[EileenMarie]

I love the style, the thought provoking question. Great write!

[highthought]

i am just trying ..thanks

[dan]

highthought, This is very brief but nowhere is it written that a poem has to be long. This is actually very good, a lot of feeling put into it with a definitive ending. Nice job! take care...dan

[highthought]

a lot to learn from you Dan

[highthought]

ops i forgot .... thanks

[Cassiopia Summers]

We all make our own opinions about souls, this poem certainly makes that point, yet it still has that open ending, and I like that. Good work.

[Gypsie]

Does the soul really have a choice? Or is it driven by an inner longing? hmmm... Thoughful

[I Am Svetlana]

We all have our own choices in which people must accept. Nice words and message.

[EMW]

I agree with every comment below mine. This is very beautiful but I would suggest switching u to you.

[A]

Simple and conveys a simple message, short but says it all, good job.

[anne p. murray- LadeeAn..]

I like the clean, simple, yet well pointed out meaning

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

simple yet beautiful

[Lily Mae]

Beautiful..x