IT'S FOR YOU ROSE (PART 1)

A rose here and there

Would you pick a rose from a garden that's not
yours?

Wouldn't you call it stealing even though it's
just a rose…?

Smelling it doesn't make the farmer annoyed,

Touching it, will stunt its growth.

 

The farmer planted it on the land he bought,

He watered it, and kept it warm;

Against the wind and rain that usually fell

He worked hard daily and answered its calls

So it's not fair to use it for your joy

 

If it's the one, take it from his land to yours

care for its purity as what the creator wants.

That if you care for her real joys…

It's not asking much, it's only asking to be secured

It gives its beauty, its body and

even more

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Beautifully written with a lovely feel to it. Keep up the good work! Top marks for this :)

[EMW]

Wow. This really makes you think.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Risky and invincible, love and relationship can be a mine field for a poet, landed and striation works best and I fell you have nailed it, well done.

[Tahna]

It sounds like a metaphor love and cheating on another...I like it its pretty beautiful...really nice, good work.

[Jill Wallflower]

I see this as doing anything for love, though I could be wrong.

This is really good

[Lily Mae]

I think this is beautiful...their is always risk in picking someone elses rose but it depends on if its worth it....xx

[Rhonda]

i give two very big thumbs up on this one :D very beautiful. i loved the language and flow of the poem.

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Very nice:)

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

i like it... :')

[highthought]

circumstances !
lot has used that word for...