IT'S FOR YOU ROSE (PART 3)

Always about the rose

_{He was teaching Islamic lessons.
She saw him, and sent her servant
telling him to come by at any time
my garden is ready for your kind.}

_{He refused her joyful appeal
and kept teaching his ideas.}

_{She gave him an offer..
“I will marry you and learn your lessons”.}

_{He said "the answer is still the same"
so, she went and learn his way,
but, from another place..}

_{The more knowledge that she receives,
the highest degree that reached
in their common believe...}

_{Time passed and she got ill
he was teaching when someone came to him
whispering in his ear
“she is no longer in this life”
he took a strong breath and died.}

_{Now to those who know
about the identify sound
mentioned in the end of it for you rose
pay a visit to the ground of your cave
and answer to this quiz}

<sub>Firstly, give reasons
for his two refusals
ask you why
did she follow his remarks?.

Finally ,give your thoughts
about his death and its cause</sub>

 

Author's Note

Yes these questions are for you, my answers will be in part 4

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Simply amazing my friend! You pose all these questions which I will puzzle about later.....I am just soaking up the beautiful verse in this. Truly inspired writing from you. Well done! Much enjoyed by me.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

It almost reminds me of the song, Rose's Turn, a gallant and tribulation prose, well written, good job

[Tahna]

Very very nice poem, I really like this and will be reading part four, I like how it makes me think....
thank you for sharing with me this is really good and I will think about the answers :)

[Stef Outsiders]

Those are good questions... this piece is thought out and written carefully, its good!!

[Magdelena]

I truly liked this. Okay lets see, I think the reason he refused her was because his beliefs were different than hers, and in his eyes she could not learn them as such. So instead she went to see for herself on how to gain such knowledge, though it may have been different views, it still was the same.

You last lines, the identify sound.. It was of his hearing of her death, the stupidity of his refusal to see her as an equal, to teach her on his own free will, and with this knowledge his own life was tied deep in heart to hers and held no more meaning for him. So when she passed, his own life as such it was, passed too.

That is my thinking..

Mags xx